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The Empire State Building stood up feeling great,
It was the tallest building in New York State.
Other buildings awed at its appearance,
Others filled with envy deep inside.
The Empire State Building was full of itself
It had too much pride.
But the fame didn’t last long, a new visitor arrived,
A new building so modest caught everyone’s eye.
The Empire State Building felt quite upset,
For all the attention it would
no longer get.
The Twin Towers came in and now took its place
as the tallest towers in New York State.
The twin Towers were so tall
And stood side by side.
They seemed so humble and kind inside.
Anger burned up in the old building,
It built up more and more.
Never was there another building
That was better than it before.
But the twin Towers were there,
And they were there to stay,
But the Empire State Building
just wanted them away.
Years went on and the Twin Towers were still around,
The Empire State Building still felt jealous
And kept its feelings sound.
It tried to think of different ways
to plot those buildings’ doom
so it could finally, once again
regain its fame back soon.
But suddenly,
Unexpectedly
Came the Twin Towers’ fate.
It all happened as quite a surprise
To all in New York State.
The Empire State Building watched the whole scene
(it had the best view of all.)
It watched the Towers go up in flames
Until they began
to fall.
Ashes and smoke were found everywhere
It left a treacherous mess.
No one could save the Towers now,
For they too were in distress.
The Empire State Building
Tried to turn away,
Until the Towers were no longer there,
And rubble was left to lay.
After witnessing such a horrifying scene,


The tallest building now,
Felt guilty
cruel
and mean.
How haughty it had been
Throughout all this time,
Never did it think
The Twin Towers
Would
actually
Die.

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This poem is in memory of September 11th and it's victims. I wrote this poem not long after the event. I was 13 when I wrote it, but I felt it's appropiate for the day, so I'm posting it with its flaws. I want you to post your thoughts about 9/11, not just comments on the poem. Perhaps we can share different stories...Where were you when it happened...etc.
(I was in New York when it happened, and I saw papers flying everywhere...I could even smell the smoke...It was really freaky.)
We were all affected in some way. Our lives have changed since then...
We will never forget.

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~Enterprise4life Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thinking about it, this poem also says be careful what you wish for. Because ESB wanted the towers dead. But the wish came true in a way nobody expected...
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~Enterprise4life Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful. I was only three when 9/11 happened, but I still remember the planes hitting the towers on TV. Though I didn't learn just how terrible it was until years later...
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*enchantma Apr 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you~ I also couldn't fully comprehend the whole situation when it first happened because I was too young, but I have a clearer understanding now. It's odd living most of your life in a post-9/11 world. We will never forget!
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~Enterprise4life Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Agreed. We will never forget.
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:iconweepingflowerfairy:
well written. I remember 9/11. Its true all of our lives have changed somehow. I can't help but wish that humans could only get along with eachother, for everyone's sake.
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:iconblondyankee:
u know that u read a good poem when, when ur done u get those shivers...u know what i'm talking about?
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:iconhimura:
Ahhh. Yeah it was a scary day. I go to school in Manhattan and we had to all be evacuated and stuff since we were a couple streets away from it all ( On Chambers street! ), so it was rather scary. This poem is awesome, it does show lots of emotion. Great job hun. =P
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:icondeathscythe02:
well written *nods* lots of emotion too...

i remember..i was just getting into english class in graaade.....10 i think....an then someone came in the room an said that that happend...i was pretty shocked.
when i went home i watched it on tv ;_; it gave me goosebumps
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:iconlocked-away:
very touching if you looked at my journal yesterday you would see that i was taking that day off because of 9/11 so now im on this. i was in school 3rd hour when it happend. the principle got on the P.A. system and told the school about it. at first i didnt think it was that much but the whole school was quite all day that day. the teachers didnt tell or show us anything about it till the day was out then i got home. it was chaotic i had no idea. my heart just sorta stoped and i couldnt stop watching it. i sat for about 5 hours just watching the same footage over and over. now i remember it and it makes me sorta sad and at times it makes me mad like i just wana blow the hell out of people like that, who would do something like that. its still a large shock to me now, even more so at what some people did on 9/11. the french celebrated let me repeat, celebrated the fantastic 19 (the 19 terroists) it just makes me sick. sorry i cant say more.
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:iconrad-eddy:
Wow, very nice. I love how you personified the buildings and added their emotions to the poem; it made it really unique. :hug:
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